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However, think about this, what if you composed a
catchier post title? I am not saying your content isn’t good, however
what if you added a headline that makes people want more? I mean ⚫︎(動画)であい橋へ向けて歩こう…尼崎運河
is kinda plain. You might look at Yahoo’s
home page and note how they write news titles to get viewers to
open the links. You might add a related video or a related
picture or two to get readers excited about what you’ve written. In my opinion, it might make your posts a little livelier.